Research aim seems vague, from "concept of blockchain one of these..." As your reader I can see too many areas you want to achieve and 500 words is too small to achieve all of that. Disruption/concerns with blockchain, software development, emerging technology (blockchain), benefits of emerging technology in financial sector.... would recommend to make it clearer as to which are you addressing or writing on.
Research aim seems vague, from "concept of blockchain one of these..."
ReplyDeleteAs your reader I can see too many areas you want to achieve and 500 words is too small to achieve all of that.
Disruption/concerns with blockchain, software development, emerging technology (blockchain), benefits of emerging technology in financial sector....
would recommend to make it clearer as to which are you addressing or writing on.
well done